nice rap!
Look the rap was okey but like when you sang, 'Jesus christ superstar!!'
You sang terribly out of tone to the rest of the music. Also, the the beginning kinda sucks and it doesnt rhyme... and the whole window was annoyingly small because of the church windows or whatever...
i would put a better score on 'sound' but i just cant get the Jesus superstar! thing out of my head. sorry